Chapter 12 Page 11

December 17th, 2018, 10:26 am
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Mahira
December 17th, 2018, 10:26 am
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Update 3 of 3 for today!

...I've had this part of the story planned for like 2 years but I wish it hadn't fallen around Christmastime and the holidays. C'est la vie I suppose!
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rervin2
December 17th, 2018, 11:25 am
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@Mahira: Well you know, nothing adds tension to a story like betrayal. Especially when you're not expecting it. Also Ganondorf better work hard to atone for this or falling from that cliff will be the least of his worries.
Mahira
December 17th, 2018, 5:52 pm
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@rervin2: Very true! And yeah... this decision and the consequences of it are gonna haunt him!
Instrutilus (Guest)
December 20th, 2018, 7:35 am
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@Mahira: To be fair, he could have just gotten to the exit and can begin figuring out a plan from there: it wouldn't help Link if BOTH were down there, whereas Ganondorf is now in a position to figure out a plan without fearing an attack (unless he's wandered into another trap).

Still, I imagine that's not how it'll go down, and sincerely look forward to seeing how your story progresses :)
Mahira
December 20th, 2018, 9:26 am
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@Instrutilus: Quite right!

And thank you, glad to hear it! :)
WiispNightmare
December 17th, 2018, 11:52 am
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Sir excuse me we were making progress and then you go and do this
Mahira
December 17th, 2018, 6:00 pm
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@WiispNightmare: I know, he's not being very cooperative. It's not ideal.
Eeveeisthebest
December 17th, 2018, 12:01 pm
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YOIUB LITLLE SHOTED FJUCK KI CANT EVBEN TYHPE
Mahira
December 17th, 2018, 6:04 pm
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@Eeveeisthebest: I was quite tempted to respond to your comments with Emperor Palpatine quotes about giving in to your anger and all that xD
Eeveeisthebest
December 18th, 2018, 6:58 am
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@Mahira: NOW IS NOT THE TIME FOR STAR WARS REFERENCES! THOUGH IF IT WAS, KNOW THAT I WOULD HAVE THE HIGH GROUND!
Mahira
December 18th, 2018, 9:48 am
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@Eeveeisthebest: LOL
Now isn't the time? It totally is the time, from a certain point of view.
I mean, Star Wars reference obsession is strong in my family. My father has it. I have it. My sister has it...
Eeveeisthebest
December 18th, 2018, 11:04 am
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@Mahira: SAME
ALSO I JUST NOTICED UR COMMENT ON THIS PAGE HOW DARE YOU MOCK ME WITH FRENCH! JE SUIS TELLEMENT BOULEVERSE MAINTENENT!
Mahira
December 18th, 2018, 3:00 pm
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@Eeveeisthebest: I'm afraid Google translate failed me in my time of need because I have no idea what you just said xD I only know a few French phrases.
Eeveeisthebest
December 18th, 2018, 11:00 pm
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@Mahira: IT SAYS I AM VERY UPSET RIGHT NOW
ALSO BS CUZ I USED GOOGLE TRANSLATE TO TYPE THAT XD
Mahira
December 19th, 2018, 7:25 am
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@Eeveeisthebest: So when I put what you said into Google translate to translate from French to English, it gave me the following:

"I AM SO GOING UP" or "I AM SO DISPLACED"

Yeah, Google translate is weird.
My Spanish-teaching friend has this meme in her classroom for a reason: https://media.makeameme.org/created/One-does-not-ji9lyh.jpg
Eeveeisthebest
December 19th, 2018, 9:54 am
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@Mahira: TO BE FAIR THOUGH I TYPED IT IN ALL CAPS AND IT TRANSLATED TO ALL LOWERCASE
ALSO I CAN'T SEE THAT MEME BUT MY FRENCH TEACHER HAS MEMES IN HER CLASS TOO
Mahira
December 19th, 2018, 5:10 pm
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@Eeveeisthebest: True! The meme was the Boromir meme, saying "One does not simply... use Google Translate"
Eeveeisthebest
December 20th, 2018, 8:30 am
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@Mahira: MY FRENCH TEACHER HAS ONE THAT'S GRUMPY CAT SAYING "Le visage de madame quand tu parle anglais"
Mahira
December 20th, 2018, 9:27 am
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@Eeveeisthebest: Now that is hilarious xD Perfect use of the Grumpy Cat meme!
Eeveeisthebest
December 20th, 2018, 10:52 am
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@Mahira: I KNOW! SHE ALSO HAS ONE THAT'S ON THE FRENCH FLAG AND SAYS ["ça va? "ça va. ça va?" "ça va, ça va." is a perfectly legit conversation in French]
Mahira
December 20th, 2018, 2:15 pm
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@Eeveeisthebest: Wow. That makes sense but.... wow. French is such a mysterious language.
Eeveeisthebest
December 20th, 2018, 9:47 pm
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@Mahira: I KNOW AND I LOVE IT BUT MY LORD THIS PAGE MAKES ME ANGRY EVERY TIME I SEE IT
Mahira
December 21st, 2018, 7:17 am
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@Eeveeisthebest: Totally understandable :)
Eeveeisthebest
December 21st, 2018, 10:44 am
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@Mahira: I'M PERFECTLY CALM THEN I SEE THIS PAGE AND I DIE A LITTLE MORE INSIDE
Ultizeta
December 17th, 2018, 2:55 pm
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Maybe it's just me, but I see this less as "betrayal" and more of 'what exactly would Ganondorf be able to do in that situation that doesn't also put himself into the exact same situation?' hence the "If I stay here, I'll be pushed off too" thought
Mahira
December 17th, 2018, 6:00 pm
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@Ultizeta: That is definitely how he sees it. Is running off the safest bet? Then that's his plan!
artofjoe
January 2nd, 2019, 5:50 pm
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Link can take care of himself. he's managed until before he met Ganondorf. I am more worried that Link thinks Ganondorf is dead. :'(
Mahira
January 4th, 2019, 7:45 am
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@artofjoe: Oh dear, that's not what I meant to imply here :I He was expecting some help, or at least for Gan to stick around to help him back up somehow... but he's just beginning to realize that he got ditched AGAIN, which for him is a big betrayal of trust.
Sorry for the confusion! I'll work harder at making things clearer as the story continues.
artofjoe
January 4th, 2019, 7:19 pm
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@Mahira: Oh haha, that is something we all struggle with don't worry! XD
It's also pretty clear on the next page what's going on.
Sudux
February 17th, 2019, 6:47 am
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Only Ganon's second betrayal... What will Link try to do to him now?